In writing we are learning to write a narrative.I write a narrative what does it actually need?
It needs a introduction then you explain the character and and were it happens and when it happens.
Then the next paragraphs comes and then you start to build up a problem. The next paragraph is the real problem. Then you make the problem bigger.
The next paragraph is to solve the problem the resolution. Then you think about a solution and then that paragraph is finished.
The last paragraph is the conclusion what they learned and what they going to do next.
Now I will show you my narrative:
The Beautiful Princess Who Was Locked Up!
At last she was finally home. Suddenly someone knocked on the door with their fingers and the princess asked, “Who are you?” She said, “I am your friend Annelise. I want to play with you.” Annelise said “Why did you asked that?” “Because I where thinking that you were a horrible monster is but I learnt to ask who is knocking on the door, but anyway lets go and play.”
It needs a introduction then you explain the character and and were it happens and when it happens.
Then the next paragraphs comes and then you start to build up a problem. The next paragraph is the real problem. Then you make the problem bigger.
The next paragraph is to solve the problem the resolution. Then you think about a solution and then that paragraph is finished.
The last paragraph is the conclusion what they learned and what they going to do next.
Now I will show you my narrative:
The Beautiful Princess Who Was Locked Up!
Early very early in the morning a princess woke up in a big old but beautiful house. She had beautiful blonde hair and a incredible skin color. Her brain was thinking of activities that she could discover later on in the week. Then suddenly she heard an echo of the hollow door knocking, it sounded like sharp fingernails scraping down a chalkboard, on the door of the old house. “Who is it? Is it a horrible monster or a friend who wants to play?”
She opened door and saw a horrible monster. He grabbed her and brought her to his master who said, “Take her to the haunted house.” The monster carried her to the haunted house. Now he locked the door of the haunted house so she couldn't escape.
After 3 hours the master came and said, “Hello! I am Christiane and I am the meanest criminal in the whole world. I love princesses because I can give you back to your father but I want lots of money. I want 1 million NZD.” The princess was listening but she didn’t take any interest in what he was saying.
The princess was thinking to herself. “I am good at fighting and I am going to kick you!” She didn’t know what was going to happen. She kicked Christiane and he fell down. The master got the key and she didn’t know so she ran to the door. She kicked Christiane again and grabbed the key. She ran as fast as she could back to her house.
At last she was finally home. Suddenly someone knocked on the door with their fingers and the princess asked, “Who are you?” She said, “I am your friend Annelise. I want to play with you.” Annelise said “Why did you asked that?” “Because I where thinking that you were a horrible monster is but I learnt to ask who is knocking on the door, but anyway lets go and play.”
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